15 thoughts on “Deference”

  1. First, let me say simply “Superb!” Second, the verse will stand nicely as is and could be called a two-line haiku, but it could be reworked slightly to emerge as a minimalist 3-liner like this:

    arrival —
    a spray of goldenrod
    bows to autumn.

    I love how you make every word count! Thanks for the “likes” during your visit! Much appreciated! Now — with joy — I follow you!

    Warmest Respect,

    Ron — http://randalane.wordpress.com

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